Tag: tone

So I’m at a small crossroads. I have to decide how this investigation of the explosion is going to move forward.

There are two issues at hand, one is the being that escaped during the explosion- could be catastrophic for Earth and who cast the spell that resulted in the explosion in the first place.

It was bad juju there, that much has been decided. I also decided to halt on the Dani potential romantic interest. Someone is interested, but he decided it wasn’t the time or place with everything going on. However, he also decided that he was going to keep himself up front and center just to annoy her.

Sounds like the second grade.

In some ways it is. Dani is a badass. Her mother is too, but way more of the law and order type. Dani is more renegade, but she’s damned lethal in all worlds.

She’ll have her tests, but for now I think she’s just going to roll her eyes and any potential romance. That will come out more in book two.

Book one, is almost more of a prequel. Bert told me she’s tired and once the end of this book happens she is going to take a back seat and focus on other priorities.

Of course she and I know the priorities, but no-one else does yet.

Book two, not sure of any others yet, will hop into the first person, whereas I’m in the third person right now, but I think it works for this cast of characters and how it’s setting itself up for prequel.

The person, the tone, the language, the sex (or lack thereof) will become more prominent.

What can I say, I like writing about sex. (insert smirk here)